Gathering Information…

Every now and then I am trying to slide in some moments with just Guy and Loraine. They haven’t really had a chance to just be together in their budding love since before Loraine died. The few minutes they get together they have Granville around and Vanalstyne or Father O’Shae is busting in on them when I am sure one of the things they want the most is just to be alone together. Speaking of Father O’Shae I have been noticing that while all my characters looks have changed over the past 100 plus pages he has become more cartoony than most. I’m not quite sure how that happened but I have been enjoying how much he has been playing into this story lately.

  • Arrakis

    I like how Guy described the various types of “dead”, it’s silly and relates back to the distinction between “liking” someone and “like liking” someone.

    I’d suggest a few Halloween ideas but I’m not really the most creative person when it comes to that sort of thing…

    • Kevin Gentilcore

      You know how teenagers are lol.

  • Rich Clabaugh

    Nice to see the love birds geting some quality time, it is ‘Teenage Love Zombies’ after all! I like their word balloon treatment as well! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next! Great job, Kevin!!

    • Kevin Gentilcore

      Thank you sir! There are some more scenes like this coming up in a little bit.